Nice! I hope there's more Sheldon v. McKay coming up; those two in a room together has got to be worth seeing.

Do you want some beta help with the next part (or this one, if you haven't posted it publicly yet)? It's very good, but there are a couple of minor things that threw me out of the story--the biggest one was Penny saying, "Thank you, Captain Obvious" when the thing Leonard said was not particularly obvious. Now, as the biggest problem sentence, that's still pretty small. The other problem sentences were smaller, but I'd be glad to point them out if you like.